Wednesday, March 28, 2012

Book Review: The Thirteenth Chime by Emma Michaels

by Emma Michaels

Genre: Mystery/Paranormal
Reading Grade: New Adult
Publication Date: August 10, 2010
Source: Kindle Store
Age Rating: 14+

Destiny has finally found the life that she has always wanted. She is about to finish college, has a fiance that loves her, and a great summer on the West Coast planned with her friend, Stephanie. But her world is turned upside down when an antique clock mysteriously chimes thirteen times and someone attacks them, sending Stephanie and her mother to the hospital.

Alone, and without any help from the police, Destiny has no choice but to turn to the one man she had left behind a year ago—her ex-boyfriend, David. Together, they must solve the riddle of the thirteenth chime before the clock strikes thirteen again. Yet as they face their own past and hearts, a trap over half a century old is waiting for them to become its prey. For revenge, fifty years is never too long... 

 
My Review

  • Plot: Destiny and her roommate Stephanie are staying with Stephanie's mother in an old Victorian house on the coast of a small Washington State town for the summer. An old grandfather clock has been part of the house since long before any of them ever set foot in it, and it has the tendency to chime thirteen times out of the blue. One night when that thirteenth chime rings out, Stephanie and her mother end up in the hospital. In a panic, Destiny calls her fearless ex-boyfriend, David, out from Cleveland to help her figure out how to unravel this paranormal mystery that has left her completely baffled.
  • Characters: Destiny is the main character, but a lot of this story revolves around her ex-boyfriend, David. Destiny calls him to fly out from their hometown instead of her fiance, Scott. She feels David is the more capable when she's feeling extreme terror, and David comes through for her. He's a really heroic character who has the tendency to be reckless in the face of danger, but always manages to come out unscathed. He still has feelings for Destiny, but Destiny sends him constant mixed signals as to whether or not she still has feelings for him. That's one thing I don't like about her—she seems to be unable to let him go, yet she is very determined to marry the guy she couldn't even reach out to when in crisis.
  • Technical Writing: The writing is weak in most areas, but does have some smooth patches here and there. I found countless writer's ticks that grated on me. Also some sentences are worded strangely, and I'm not fond of the clumsy use of adverbs. I have a personal preference for 3rd person-limited POV in adult fiction, yet this one was in 3rd person-omniscient, jumping from one character's head to another and then another, all in one scene. Very confusing and pulled me right out of the story. I think that type of 3rd person POV should only be used for children's fiction, but that's just my opinion.
  • Storytelling: Besides the likable characters (Stephanie's mother being one of the funniest), I think the story aspect was strong, too. It has an intriguing paranormal mystery premise that got me interested, and it did a great job keeping me just clueless enough to keep on reading to see the characters uncover the mystery. It uses a very different kind of paranormalcy that I've never heard about before, and it may even be the author's clever invention, this “Sense” phenomenon. I think for lovers of mysteries that can be a bit scary—scarier than Scooby-Doo, anyway—this would be a great fit, although, don't expect the rational explanation and the masked bad guy cursing those “meddling kids” at the end.
  • Overall Quality: It goes down on the technical writing, but back up again because of the effective storytelling and good characters, so it evens out to being average. I wouldn't read this if you hate reading any writing that is less than flawless. But, if you like a great paranormal mystery despite poor writing, then this one might work for you.
  • Favorite Moment/Scene: It's a spoilery scene at the end when Destiny and David are finally confronted with the spooky clock-dwelling thing that is causing so much trouble in the old Victorian. It was such a relief to finally arrive at that moment and find out what was behind that pesky mystery.
  • My Score: 3.5 out of 5 stars.


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14 comments:

  1. I don't understand why she would call her ex-boyfriend... maybe it's just me, but I would call the one I'm with, instead of the one I am no longer with. Seems strange, but with a provocative cover and interesting summary, I may pick it up!

    great review. :)

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    1. @Ash: I thought the MC still had feelings for her ex, but was out of touch with her own feelings. He's a really cool character, though!

      Thanks. ;)

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  2. Dang! This one sounds good but I can't handle writing that's littered with adverbs. :( I think it would just end up ruining the story for me.

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    1. @Jenny: It does! But, yeah the writing isn't quite that good.

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  3. First of all, I love that cover. Gorgeous. Second, I was reallllly intrigued by the synopsis. I was headed to the kindle store. But...I'm hesitant now. I could probably deal w/the sentence structure, but jumping POV mid scene w/out a break bugs me. I would still give this a try, probably, b/c of the premise. And the fact the ex-BF sounds so cool. Awesome review, Cathy. As always.

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    1. @Andrea: It is gorgeous! Definitely attracted me to reading it. At least it's only 99 cents, so it's not a big risk. You may end up liking it, after all.

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  4. The premise sounds very cool. Makes me think of the creepy clock in The Last Unicorn. :)
    I think omniscent POV is one of the hardest POVs to write and applaud anyone who goes for it. Unfortuantely, if it's not done, it tends to distract from the story.

    Great review!

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    1. @Camille: Yes, omniscient POV is very hard to do right. J.K. Rowling may have used it a bit in HP1 and succeeded wildly. But, she's J.K. Rowling, so, of course she did!

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  5. I've heard good things about this one, but clumsy writing would drive me crazy. That's why I don't do self pubs.
    And as for the omniscient POV, I think Rowling's use of it in HP1 was one of the weakest parts of the whole series (the writing of the first book was, understandably, not nearly as good as her later books).

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    1. @Alison: I'm here to inform!

      I haven't read Rowling's later HP books, but I thought she handled omniscient 3rd-person better than anyone I've seen in HP1. I usually see it handled badly.

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  6. Seems like a bit of love triangle fail! Which is why I am such a horrible love triangle writer because I would do the exact same thing. I'm not a massive critic of slightly flawed writing if the story is strong so I think I might give this a try. Although it feels like it's got a bit of a ghostly aspect to it which would be way too scary for me!

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    1. @Lan: Maybe you're right! It's hard to see it as a love triangle because the fiance is barely in the story. It's not really that scary, but maybe a fear of ghosts warrants your apprehension.

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  7. How should I but this ,,, i like the idea of the Victorian old house and the old clock but why would anyone call their ex-boyfriends when they need some help, shouldn't she call her fiance. the book look kind of good but I'm still not sure if i should read it :)

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    1. @Lilly: Yeah, the ex is an odd choice, and the MC's reason for calling him seem only because he's the more capable helper. Well, it seemed suspicious to me, but never culminated into a scenario where the MC admitted to still having feelings for the ex. Weird.

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